Comments for Alyssa Brown http://alyssabrown.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Thu, 18 Dec 2008 15:12:24 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on A new way of life: with the steam engine by ritajeanstangherlin http://alyssabrown.edublogs.org/2008/12/08/a-new-way-of-life-with-the-steam-engine/comment-page-1/#comment-4 ritajeanstangherlin Thu, 18 Dec 2008 15:12:24 +0000 http://alyssabrown.edublogs.org/?p=6#comment-4 Your fifth paragraph should target the future. What benefits will we continue to enjoy because back then a steam engine was invented? Your fifth paragraph should target the future. What benefits will we continue to enjoy because back then a steam engine was invented?

]]> Comment on A new way of life: with the steam engine by ritajeanstangherlin http://alyssabrown.edublogs.org/2008/12/08/a-new-way-of-life-with-the-steam-engine/comment-page-1/#comment-3 ritajeanstangherlin Thu, 18 Dec 2008 15:11:09 +0000 http://alyssabrown.edublogs.org/?p=6#comment-3 I would like to see you write a more traditional first sentence that identifies the prompt. Other than that, a good essay. I would like to see you write a more traditional first sentence that identifies the prompt. Other than that, a good essay.

]]> Comment on correct animoto all the rest are bad by ritajeanstangherlin http://alyssabrown.edublogs.org/2008/10/28/correct-animoto-all-the-rest-are-bad/comment-page-1/#comment-2 ritajeanstangherlin Thu, 06 Nov 2008 17:37:33 +0000 http://alyssabrown.edublogs.org/?p=5#comment-2 A solid, strong trailer for a definitely interesting book. My only concern is your choice of music (language); I would re-edit this trailer for music only. Overall, an excellent trailer that captures all the required components in a compelling way. A solid, strong trailer for a definitely interesting book. My only concern is your choice of music (language); I would re-edit this trailer for music only. Overall, an excellent trailer that captures all the required components in a compelling way.

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